8th May 2019
Today we played Double Dare. our teacher bought the packet to school for us to try. Miss Moran asked me to
Pick a lallie she said they were yummy. So I got one out of the box, its was disgusting. I tasted like dirt it tasted like garden. I got a lollie that taste like coke and the 2 one was tasted like toth past but it was still good and it was so fun.
Hi I am Alaska from Karoro School. This sounds like a really fun cool day. Thank you for telling us about your day. One thing you could do next time is fix your punctuation.
ReplyDeleteHi Zechariah,its jack from Karoro School I have not played double dare before but it sounds fun and at the same time disgusting. I can see that you have some mean and not nice comments on your blog maybe you should tell a teacher about the situation. Other than that I like the idea of doing that with the lollies. You may need to check your spelling. Thanks for sharing your work.
ReplyDeleteHello Zechariah. I liked how you used adjectives to describe the lollies. Maybe next time you could read the sentences to check they make sense.
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